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the end is near... by shotsfiredimagedown the end is near... by shotsfiredimagedown
one of the best I've seen in Ariz.
:iconwhitephoenix616:
This is a lovely photograph of the sunset or sunrise and moving clouds. However, I do have some suggestions to improve your photography. My first suggestion is to try and not bump up your contrast as much as you have in photoshop. Yes, it makes the colours really pop and its hard to resist the urge, but I feel that it makes the photograph seem fake in a lot of ways.

Another suggestion is that I would love to see some of that ground. Use the rule of thirds and let me see some of the landscape. I love the sky and all its beauty, but only seeing the sky doesn't let me see the effect that such a sunset has on the landscape itself. However, I do like that you included the tree at the bottom of the image to give me some contextualization.

I however love the mix of the blue and orange. I especially love the yellow that peeks out at the bottom of the image.

Apologies if this critique sounds harsh. Just trying to help improve your work. keep on taking those photographs!
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February 22
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Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot SX10 IS
Shutter Speed
1/50 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Feb 23, 2017, 7:52:44 AM
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Windows Photo Editor 10.0.10011.16384
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